The SCAR

by Alena Brice
(St.Lucia)


The blissful and hurtful Penetration
Stimulated the Situation
The fight and pain caused by your Action
Without no Discussion
Of your Destruction
Left me with nothing else but Confusion
It was only me, my Determination
Left with one Direction
You destroyed me without my Permission
Your cruel act gave Contractions
Had no choice but to get a Prescription
Left a scar…..your Decoration
Blinded by your Disruption
The ail caused by your Reaction
Left for dead, then the Inspection
Many thought of a Conclusion
But it was my Decision
That caused your Termination
It couldn't be your Religion
For my Obstruction
So I’m taking Precaution
I have made my Revolution
Using this poem as my Motivation

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Apr 14, 2013
Good Rhythm!
by: Tyrone

Alena certainly got the words flowing. The rhythm is good and there's much to pick up from this poem. It sound's like Alena was let down and her feelings were hurt by someone; could have been someone whom she trusted? There's also very much assertiveness in this poem.

Have you ever though of taking up freelance writing? In order to boost your confidence there are many writing courses you can choose from that would develop your writing skills. Good one!!

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